You Are Being Watched- Concept Still.

A concept tilt still from my wannabe first film (which is still in its preprepre production stages) about a 7 year old girl coming to terms with her conscience. This was a visualization for a scene where the girl sits on the table to eat and sees the food she doesn't like, as she looks up, she sees a certain friend watching her from the other side of the table; and this was also an option for background treatment.

The two strange demarcations along the length are to show as the camera tilts up, it goes up three units, or is supposed to go, for now... well.

Let me know if there are any suggestions on how I can vary it; any feedback welcome, as always:)